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Hello,
in the following I will evaluate Gabriel's video.
His topic is a topic, which concerns a lot of people and is a topic of relevance: Sleeping issues. He is putting in a great effort to visualize the problem and to make the ideas and suggestions clear. The process of the critical thinking is definitely visible and he also includes the intellectual standards, e.g. relevance and preicison by using proven numbers. All in all, his reasoning has a high quality and clear structure.
Best regards.
in the following I will evaluate Gabriel's video.
His topic is a topic, which concerns a lot of people and is a topic of relevance: Sleeping issues. He is putting in a great effort to visualize the problem and to make the ideas and suggestions clear. The process of the critical thinking is definitely visible and he also includes the intellectual standards, e.g. relevance and preicison by using proven numbers. All in all, his reasoning has a high quality and clear structure.
Best regards.
(85 words)
Hello,
In this video, the topic has been well chosen because sleep issues concern everybody.
The main purpose, which is to raise awareness about these sleeping issues, is clearly stated and explained throughout the video.
All reasons for sleeping issues are based on reliable sources, which are cited throughout the video. The video presents multiple points of view, such as those of couples, stressed people, and phone addicts, and explains how people can manage sleeping issues depending on the reasons behind them. The process of critical thinking is clear, accurate, and logical.
In conclusion, the video is of high quality, with each point based on relevant sources, and it is aimed at everyone.
Best regards.
(115 words)
In this video, the topic has been well chosen because sleep issues concern everybody.
The main purpose, which is to raise awareness about these sleeping issues, is clearly stated and explained throughout the video.
All reasons for sleeping issues are based on reliable sources, which are cited throughout the video. The video presents multiple points of view, such as those of couples, stressed people, and phone addicts, and explains how people can manage sleeping issues depending on the reasons behind them. The process of critical thinking is clear, accurate, and logical.
In conclusion, the video is of high quality, with each point based on relevant sources, and it is aimed at everyone.
Best regards.
(115 words)